Hello, I'm a high school graduate whose applying for his first job, at Staples business depot for a sales associate job. Can you please criticize my resume.
Objective
Touse my strong interpersonal and problem solving skills in a sales associateposition.
Profile
· Excellentinterpersonal and communications skills honed as the secretary of school’senvironmental club.
· Greatin working in teams or in groups.
· Comfortableunder pressure and in a fast paced environment.
· Reliable,organized and punctual.
· Pocessesinternet and computer skills and knowledge.
· Bilingualin English and Bengali
Acheivementsand Accomplishments
- Contributed over 45 hours of volunteer time to improve the awareness of the environment at W.A Porter.
- Secretary of Environmental Club in 2006/2007.
- Worked with other students and teachers with the school’s EcoSchools commitee, which aided the school management in becoming a certified gold ecoschool.
- Helped run Snack Wednesdays program at Satec, a successful popcorn business during school lunch hours.
- Completed the OBEA Grade 11 Accounting Contest. Ranked 2nd for W.A. Porter.
- Honour Roll 2003-2004, 2004-2005, 2005-2006, 2006-2006
- Competed in the Toronto Regional Envirothon for W.A. Porter team in 2006 and 2007. Team ranked 1st place at ecostations and 2nd place overall in 2006.
- Recieved the award for Grade 11 Advanced Functions and Relations in 2006.
- Received 2003/04 Principal’s