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BOB SMITH

12 Oaks · Philadelphia, PA 19103

(215) 664-2548 · E-mail: bobsmith@yahoo.com

OBJECTIVE: To obtain a position in the financial services field building upon my previous experience

with relationship management, sales support, and customer service with a successful and

growth oriented company.

QUALIFICATIONS:

· Solid experience in customer service and sales support within the financial service industry.

· Extremely well organized with a strong attention to detail.

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Hello BOB,

1st. Get rid of the ":" colons after your headings, ie SKILLS:

2nd Your qualifications should a statement not in Bulletpoints form

Like this;

Deep experience in customer service and sales support within the financial service industry. Well organized, self-motivated and flexible. A Member of American Marketing Association.

3rd Get rid of the Interests

4th Your Referances part should be just like this:

Referances available upon request.

· 5th Get rid of the essential skills. It's a given. Hope this helps.

Hope

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