Resume Critique PleaseIf you would be so kind, I would love any input you could offer, thank you! I will tailor my objective to specific jobs as I apply as some have suggested, or possibly shuffle bullets around. Thanks in advance and have a great day!
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OBJECTIVE Secure a position in a business related environment where I can utilize my previous experience and work related skills to continue personal and job related growth.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Sales Manager – Local Appliance Store – Hometown, USA 6/96 to Present
Financial Rate Analyst - Healthcare Company - Hometown, USA 11/94 to 6/96
Warehouse Supervisor – Building Supplies.- Hometown, USA ...[Message truncated]
Change you objective so it does not sound so general. Everyone wants to secure a job and use their experience (status-quo) and no one cares about your personal growth. Think of yourself as a product and think how you would sell yourself to someone. In your current position remove and revise the line that starts with "Dealt". Everyone knows what that is but make it sound more positive and you did something to make it better. Change "Worked as computer " to maybe just liaison.
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