Please critique my resumeDear Kim, I would appreciate your valuable comments to my resume. Thanks in advance Alfonso General manager/plant manager/director of manufacturing/vp of operations
P&L Responsibility/start-ups /turnaround management/consumer products and services/lean manufacturing/ mexico maquiladora/automotive/international operations/continuos improvement Fortune 500 Executive: I have been fortunate to enjoy a management career that has include key positions with well known firms including Johnson Controls, ITT Automotive, Valeo Electronics, Global Data Solutions and Brunswick Bowling and Billiards. Career track: Professional growth through such companies as materials coordinator, production manager, current engineering manager, business unit manager, plant manager and general manager. Start ups/Turnaround Management: Over the past 19 years I have been utilizing manufacturing expertise gained with major corporations, building front line leadership teams accomplishing tasks such as major start ups, plant relocations and staff realignment in a wide range of situations. Proven Record-Across all major manufacturing functions: I am skilled in areas of management of operations, including plant relocations, union labor contracts and government relations, I have track record of increasing sales, reducing costs and streamlining operations. international experience: My career has been given me the opportunity to manage plants in mexico and united states, for benchmarking purposes i have visited plants in canada, brasil, germany and france. B.S. IE –Universidad Autonoma de Hidalgo- MS- Texas A&M- Bilingual- English/Spanish. Selected Achievements and Skills
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Change it all to a more traditional type of resume format and make it more fomal. It reads like a sales letter/cover letter than a resume.
I would make your resume a quick read - bullet points, direct language and less words. More like a formal list You can use your cover letter to highlight your personal sales flare that I see in the tone of your resume. | |
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