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Heres my resume...please give me your honest opinion. any hints greatly apreciated! My address and contact details... ...... ...... ...... Personal Information: Born XX.XX.1982 in New York, NY, USA Citizenships: US, German, Danish
Objective and Summary: As a recent Business / Economics GraduateI am looking for challenging entry-level opportunities. With my internationalexperience, language skills and proven commitment I will be an outstandingasset for your Organization. An honest and hardworking team player, who learnsquickly, pays attention to detail and produces quality work. Willing torelocate and to cover relocation expenses. Education: 03.01.2007 Graduation, 4.5 year degree, “DiplomOekonom” (US Bachelor´s degree equivalent) in Business Administration /Economics, focus on Production Management / Supply Chain Management,International Economics and Politics, grade: 2.06 on a scale from 1 to 5, 1being best, GPA equivalent 3.5 – 3.0. 03.01.2007 Thesis: A Comparison between ISO9000and Six Sigma Since fall 2002 Study of Business Administration / Economics,Carl von Ossietzky University, Oldenburg, Germany June 2001 Graduation, German High School,Tokyo / Yokohama, Japan. Grade: 2.3 on a scale from 1 to 6, 1 being best. 1998 - 2001 GermanHigh School, Tokyo / Yokohama, Japan 1995 - 1998 KonradAdenauer Gymnasium, Meckenheim, Germany 1991 - 1995 GermanHigh School, Moscow, Russia 1988 - 1991 GermanHigh School, Antwerp, Belgium
Previous Work Experience: Fall 2005 Internship,German Mission to the United Nations, New York, 8 weeks Responsibilities included attendance at Conferences atthe 59th session of the General Assembly, writing of short reportsand other clerical duties. I also assisted in planning and implementation ofsocial functio...[Message truncated]
any help greatly appreciated. Should i cut it down to one page? should I delete my birthdate? thank you dudes and dudettes Hello, Definitely remove any personal information regarding your age, birthdate, and nationality. You only want to show the different languages that you speak in Language section. | |
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