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Is my resume clear


I'm not sure what impression people have of my resume.  Sometimes I think employers feel like I don't have any experience.  Sometimes, I think they think I'm over-qualified.  Other times I think they are misiterpreting my job experiences.  Can someone look at my resume and tell me what they see and how they think I can improve it.

 

Velma Sparrow

E-mail:
Velma.Sparrow@myemailprovdercom

Cell:
 555-555-5555

Temporary Employment

Company A 

Notable short-term Assignments from 2005 - Present

  • ABC: Inputted data into Deal Dynamo and Dynamex financial software
  • DEF: Assisted California branch in their annual conference from their NYC location
    • GHI 
    • Receptionist; faxed, photocopied, mailed, ordered supplies, ‘goferred’, requested maintenance
    • JKL:
    • Inputted data into the Risk Control Tracking System (RCTS) in half the time projected
    • MNO:
    • Assisted with preparations for the companies 10th Anniversary Celebration

    Company B

    Notable short-term Assignments from 2005 - Present

    • PQR:
    • Receptionist; Answered and transferred calls, requested maintenance
    • STU:
    • Worked on the Empire BlueCross BlueShield projects setting up appointments with HRs to speak with Empire Representatives.
    • VWX: Registered event guests and speakers and answered questions regarding the time and location of the seminars

    Part-Time Employment

    ----
     XYZ Insurance Agency ----

    Clerk, City, State

    1995-1998, Summer 2003

    1. Inputted customer data into TAM (Insurance computer program)
    1. Assisted with customer mailings, including formatting memos using MS Word
    1. Revised paper file system to make file retrieval faster

    Relevant Skills

    • Intermediate knowledge of Microsoft Office Suite (Word, Excel, and Outlook) 1997 & 2003
    • Intermediate knowledge of Adobe Photoshop
    • Intermediate knowledge of The Agency Manager (TAM)
    • Ability to type 55 to 60 wpm
    • Education

      M.F.A., Acting, 2005, GPA: 3.68

      Acting School, Acting University City, State

      B.A., cum laude, Theater, 2002, GPA 3.64

      Liberal Arts College City, State

      Certificate of Completion, Theater, Summer 2001

      Ivy League College City, State

       

      keep in mind that I changed the names of the colleges, universities, and companies and used a fake name.  Also, I had trouble with the formatting in the e-mail because of the cut and paste.

       

      Thank you for your input.

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