I need help, pleaseAfter leaving my job late last year, I landed a job 2 months later, but laid off one month later. Should I bother listing that position? Will you please look at my resume? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ CAREER OBJECTIVE: To obtain a Food Service Management position in a casual environment that serves a quality product in a fast paced and detailed oriented establishment that offers room for growth; focuses on superior customer service and attention to the operating dollar.
EXPERIENCE
MANAGER, 6/2006 to 12/2006RED HOT & BLUE BBQManaged FOH and BOH employees, schedule and conducted shift meetings Responsible for bar Inventory Verified and coordinated bulk deliveries with catering department Assisted hostess, servers, visited customers, and server checkouts Authorized and audited discounts for current promotions Created and send personalized emails from comment cards Assisted with off-site catering Completed evening smoker loads, p.m. prep sheet and next day’s pars Walked off kitchen with opening manager Expo while managing kitchen Monitored evening dining room service Prepared DSR, complete P&L, deposit, and confirm funds, Oversaw kitchen close, walked store, perimeter, and set alarm
STUDENT, 1/2004 to 4/2006, Brookhaven College and Aims Academy
MANAGER, 4/2002 to 10/ 2003...[Message truncated]
I don't think I would list that one. Your resume doesn't look bad, but you need to take another peek at it...a few commas at the end of lines. Good luck!
Thanks and Iwill correct them!
I would not put commas at the end of lines. However, I would put bullets at the beginning. I think your resume is great. You have lots of great experience. Best of luck!
LOL That's what I meant...that she had commas at the end of a few lines and they needed to be removed. | |
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