please helpi really need some critics on my resume it seems boring.
OBJECTIVE: To obtain a position that will utilize my experience and education, while providing for combined professional and educational growth . EDUCATION: M.S. Behavioral Science, Cameron University ( Expected 2009) B.A. Sociology, Fayetteville State University May 2003
Professional History: Lawton Public Schools , Lawton, OK 01/07-current Substitute Teacher · Follow the lesson plan left by the teacher. · Provide continuity of instruction. · Maintain classroom control. · Maintain a classroom environment conducive to effective learning. · Make the day meaningful to the students.
Dillards, Lawton , Lawton,OK 07/06-08/06 Sales Associate · Developed client base and increased sales volume · Helped train new employees, reviewed cash. Cumberland County Schools, Fayette ...[Message truncated]
The first thing I noticed is the sentence "Follow the lesson plan left by the teacher". Perhaps there is a more intriging way to state this? Something along the lines of Engage students in lesson plan while maintaining continuity ? I think that jazzing the language used to describe substituting might help. :-) Other than that, seems okies to me!
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