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i really need some critics on my resume it seems boring.

 

OBJECTIVE: To obtain a position that will utilize my experience and education, while providing for combined professional and educational growth

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EDUCATION: M.S. Behavioral Science, Cameron University           ( Expected 2009)

B.A. Sociology, Fayetteville State University                                May 2003

 

Professional History:

Lawton Public Schools , Lawton, OK                                              01/07-current

Substitute Teacher

· Follow the lesson plan left by the teacher.

· Provide continuity of instruction.

· Maintain classroom control.

· Maintain a classroom environment conducive to effective learning.

· Make the day meaningful to the students.

 

Dillards, Lawton , Lawton,OK                                                       07/06-08/06

Sales Associate

· Developed client base and increased sales volume
through personal attention to customers.

· Helped train new employees, reviewed cash.
operations for accuracy and restocked inventory.

 

Cumberland County Schools, Fayette

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The first thing I noticed is the sentence "Follow the lesson plan left by the teacher". Perhaps there is a more intriging way to state this? Something along the lines of Engage students in lesson plan while maintaining continuity ? I think that jazzing the language used to describe substituting might help. :-) Other than that, seems okies to me!

 

 

thank you
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