This is a reworked resume and I could really use some comments on anything I might change or keep. Thanks for any and all help.

Seeking a position utilizing my Business Analyst, Technical Training & Support, and Management skills.

Business Analyst

- Served on a 4 person team for requirements gathering and

  documentation for Library of Congress RFQ.

- Performed analysis of new requirements, including the implementation

  of a financial interface.

- One of two analysts to review existing client requirements, including

  the examination of client business processes for Department of

  Commerce.

- Designed database and structure in Microsoft Access for documentation

  on training schedules and student information to provide client

  management team with up to date employee training progress.

- Provided functional expertise and coordination in the design,

  development, testing and validation of systems integration and

  functional interface requirements between end users and technology

  team.

- Designed Microsoft Excel Spreadsheet to expedite data entry for State

  Department procurement division saving 70% on data entry time.

Technical Training & Support

- Training lead for government GSA procurement agencies nation wide

  on proprietary procurement software.

- Managed 10 to