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I'm looking for a staff accountant position and not sure if my resume is the problem.  Please give me any advice on how to improve it.  Thanks!

 

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS

 

§     Excellent interpersonal, attention to detail and analytical skills with the ability to work well in a team environment

§     Self-starter, flexible, and independently motivated to work with general guidelines

§     Skills to coordinate work flow and prioritize assignments when faced with heavy workload, deadlines, and frequent interruptions

§     Strong skills with Microsoft Office (Excel, Word, FrontPage, and PowerPoint).

§     Efficient in QuickBooks, GreatPlains, PeopleSoft, InfoLease, Fiserv and IPS Sendero (Accounts Payable, Fixed Asset, and General Ledger)

 

CAREER EXPERIENCE

 

xxx ‘06 – xxx ‘07                   XXXXXX                                            XXXXX

Jr. Staff Accountant

·        Administered both payables and receivables

·        Analytically reviewed expense related accounts

·        Prepared journal entries and GL reconciliations for month-end and year-end closing

·        Performed daily and monthly bank reconciliations

Here's my critique:

1) In your summary you talk much about yourself, but you don't say what you can do for your prospective employer.

2) No numbers (e.g. when you mentioned the ability to work well in a team environment, how many on that team?). You have to get specific (how many years experience is another one?). What do you mean by efficient? (what is the standard and how do you specifically compare?).

3) No mention of accomplishments (e.g. for much money did you make for or save the firm?).

4) Instead of "frequent interruptions" (which is a negative opinion), why not phrase it as "unscheduled work emergencies" or maybe even better wording?

Hope this helps (check out Monster's resume tutorials).

 

Why do you force the reader to go through five bullet points to find out you're an accountant?

Use an Objective and state it right up front.
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