Chron. vs. Skills Resume Review
I have sent out several (10-12) resumes for jobs posted on Monster, and have gotten zero responses. Most are entry-level jobs in Information Systems. I suspect my resume might be the problem. I am a career-changer and just graduated with a BA in Information systems, and while there are some good things on my resume, I don't think the format I am using is helping me out. I am thinking about switching to a skills-style resume to de-emphasize the fact that I am switching to an unrelated profession and hopefully highlight what I can do. In an interview, I know I actually could relate my experience, but I haven't gotten the opportunity to do so yet. I am also looking into applying for some business strategy consulting jobs, but I think the same may hold true for that field. Any and all critiques and suggestions welcome. Thanks in advance!
Education:
My University / Collegetown, USA · Bachelor of ArtsInformation Systems o Multimediaconcentration o BusinessAdministration Core · 3.9 CumulativeGPA · Coursework:Management Information Systems, Systems Analysis, Networking Essentials, ITSoftware/Hardware, Multimedia, Advanced Multimedia, Principles of Management ·...[Message truncated]
Oh...you gotta change it, definitely... Section of post does not conform with Monster TOU
Thank you for your comments. I added a skills section using many of the things previously listed under experience plus added some new ones. I still have some tweaking to do, but I'd like to post this updated version and hear any responses as to whether this new version is more effective. Thanks! Name
Summary: I am a logical, analytical,and creative professional with the ability to work with technology and peoplewith equal ease. I have exceptional written and verbal communication abilities,an intuitive learner, and eager to take on new challenges. I can face thosechallenges on an individual level or in a team environment as the situationdemands. I strive for excellence in everything I do, and am result-oriented.Customer satisfaction is my ultimate goal, whether those customers are internal,external, or both. Skills:
Training and Organization
Creativity and Communication
Education:
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1. I do not like your summary one bit. It's a bunch of vague words about how great you are. I wouldn't read through five sentences that don't state what you are. Simply use an Objective: Objective: an entry level position in Information Technology. Makes life so much simpler for the reader. 2. Ten or twelve resumes is not a lot. I assume that I will get anywhere from a 1% to a 20% response rate to my resumes. Send more out.
Let me begin by thanking you for recognizing how great I am :) I don't think those five sentences are vague, and they address some of the most common attributes employers are looking for in business analysts. The following list is from the most recent job I applied for: • Technically oriented but able to handle periodic business systems consulting • Strong written communication skills. • Strong oral communication skills. • Work independently and in a team environment • Committed to quality. • Think like a Customer/End User. Sounds kinda like my summary, no? Having said that, I actually agree with you. I went to a career event today, and I watched how fast the recruiters I talked to scanned my resume. They were on the second page in less than 5 seconds, so there is no way they can get all of that information while scanning. I think I am going to replace the summary section with an Objective section that is much shorter, but more specific than "seeking an entry-level IT position". Those first five sentences will probably find their way into my cover letter instead of resume. I am also going to try and thin out the Skills section and also the Experience section to make it easier to scan quickly. I may also put the Education section first since it is proabably the most relevant. I've been pretty selective what I apply for. Since I'm career changing and have a fairly good job (just not one that chalenges me), I don't HAVE to go anywhere, so I only apply for those jobs that interest me, are in my area, and I'm qualified for. Thanks for taking the time to respond. Good luck in your search. Any other comments/criticism welcome. | |||||
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