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Would like someone to look at resume and tell me everything that iswrong with it. I have loads of experience in so many areas (oneperson office) how do I get that across? I didn't updated it very wellwhen I spent a couple of years in Pharmacy, so any help would be great.
ADMINISTRATION/ OFFICE MANAGER
Top-performing management professional with proven skills in communication, business administration and office management. 15years experience in administrative operations and office management.Delivers consistent contributions to increased productivity throughexpert leadership, self-motivation, and customer/client relationshipmanagement skills. Professional Experience
CareerClaim, Inc September 06-Present Accounting/Payroll ManagerCollect, Process and pay all Accounts Payables. Invoice, and receive all Accounts Receivables. Prepare weekly payroll in Quick Books, General Ledger, Monthly Bank Reconciliation. Handle all new employee paperwork. Handle all worker compensation and unemployment claims.
Jonsco, Inc Dec 05- September 06 Office Manager Provide administrative support for President, Vice President, and Superintendent of this Commercial Paint Company. Performdaily job cost accounting functions including, but not limited toaccounts payable and receivable, prepare weekly payroll and monthlybank reconciliation. Track sales and prepare monthly sales tax report. Prepare and track all proposals for bid invitations for new projects and setup new projects as bids are won. Maintain equipment inventory and track new purchases and equipment rental for each project. Handleall employee related issues such as Texas Workforce Commission andWorker’s Compensation claims, new hires, terminations, vacation andsick leave tracking.
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"15 years experience in administrative operations and office management." Rewrite as "Been in administrative operations and office management for 15 years." as you shouldn't lead off a sentence with a number (one of those rules of grammar). "Handle all new employee paperwork." Rewrite as "Responsible for all new employee paperwork." to avoid redundancy as the next sentence also leads off with "handle." (do the same for the last sentence under Office Manager by substituting processed for handle). Also under Office Manager, Does "Dec 05- September 06" mean December 05, 2005 to September 06, 2006 or Dec 2005 to September 2006? In addition change all the leadoff verbs to the past tense as this is a position you used to do.
Thank you so much. I knew all of that, but it is nice when someone else can see it and tell me what is looking straight at me. Thanks again.
I would also try to use bullets. I'm sure the formatting in your REAL resume is better than what is presented here. I had a problem formatting my own resume for critiquing. Another thing you might want to add is an objective of some sorts. | |
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