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ELIJAH J. DEGRAFFENREIDT
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Bronx, N.Y. ******

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Education: Monroe College Bronx, N.Y.
A.S. of Computer Information Systems 04/ 2004
Presidents List G.P.A. 3.78

 

Work Experience:

09/2006-present                       Bank of America                                            NY, NY

Sr. Personal Banker / Group Banking Supervisor

  • Build new customer relationships utilizing new sales techniques
  • Handle auditing of new accounts / wires / loans processing
  • Supervise tellers when needed/ handle management level overrides
  • Strengthen existing relationships with customers through cross selling
  • Develop relationships with small businesses as well as corporations
  • Sell deposit and lending products to customers
  • Coordinate on sites with neighboring businesses, schools and community centers

03/2005-09/2006                     Washington Mutual                                       Bronx, NY

Personal Financial Representative/Lending Specialist/T.S.R. Specialist

  • Sold deposit and lending products to customers
  • Built new customer relationships through sales initiatives and telemarketing
  • Trained co-workers in successful/useful sales techniques and approaches
  • Cross-sold and provided referrals to other departments of the bank.
  • Called outside prospects and existing clients to develop and maintain business relationships
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