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I have written and rewritten my resume no less that 15 times. I have had other eyes look it over I have followed samples, I have had a semi professional re do it with no success. I think that the problem is that I have had a major career change in the last 4 years I have gone from working as an administrative assistant/financial services professional to Event and Meeting Planner. I would love to marry all of my skills into one harmonious resume so that I can re enter corporate America bringing the old w/the new and get a great job. Problem I have to much info I think but it all seems so important. My feelings are that since I don't have  a college degree that my experience will have to do the talking. How can I widdle down my resume to the key points without losing the Zing. I have been looking for employment now for about 3 months with no success. Please help.

Jane Doe

                                                        1234 ABC Street

Any Town, USA 12345

555-555-5555 * HelpMe@pleasehelp.com

 

                      

EXPERIENCE SUMMARY

 

Over 12 years of experience managing commercial administration issues. Proven leadership in financial services, event planning, customer satisfaction and technical support.  Demonstrated ability to identify complex problems, gather the appropriate resources, review and refine alternatives, schedule and implement solutions. Business experience includes supervision, marketing, customer service, organizational and planning acumen, training, staffing, development and coordination expertise.  Outstanding communications skills, works well in a highly diverse fast changing environment.

 

ACCOMPLISHMENTS

 

  • Responsible for event development and designs including building set structures, table-scape design, balloon art specialist, floral design, and visual marketing.
  • Proven leader on special projects such as creating corporate affairs, tailoring a departmental relocation, and diverse human resource activities associated with new hire and transfer personnel.
  • Provided critical high-level interface with internal resources including Information Management Systems, Finance, Operations, Marketing, E-Commerce and support.
  • Effectually researched risk management issues regarding departmental and administrative, policies, procedures, information or services. Provided solutions to inquiries from multiple market sources, core or brand organizations.
  • Developed and produced presentations to be shared and used by management as well as outside vendors.
  • Reconciled departmental expense accounts as reflected on the distribution summary or operating statement; identified discrepancies and prepared variance analysis to explain comparisons to last years result or the current year budget. Assisted in the development and forecasting of budget items.
  • Processed travel arrangements as needed for executive staff and associated personnel, including reservations for airlines, car and hotel. E
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I did two things: your resume is indicating that you're currently working at two places right now, and you can drop the "references by request" line.
"I would love to marry all of my skills into one harmonious resume sothat I can re enter corporate America bringing the old w/the new andget a great job."

And therein lies your problem.

Corporate America has jobs to fill.  They define them, and then look for the person best qualified.

Your resume lacks focus.  Your Experience Summary has five sentences, and the second one lists four different areas.

Try

Objective: A position as an Event Planner

and use it for all your Event Planner positions.  Remove or push to the end of your resume all stuff that has nothing to do with Event Planning.

Repeat for all other positions you're applying for.

It makes the companies' job so much easier when they can see at a glance what kind of position you'd fit.
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