Im DesperateI have written and rewritten my resume no less that 15 times. I have had other eyes look it over I have followed samples, I have had a semi professional re do it with no success. I think that the problem is that I have had a major career change in the last 4 years I have gone from working as an administrative assistant/financial services professional to Event and Meeting Planner. I would love to marry all of my skills into one harmonious resume so that I can re enter corporate America bringing the old w/the new and get a great job. Problem I have to much info I think but it all seems so important. My feelings are that since I don't have a college degree that my experience will have to do the talking. How can I widdle down my resume to the key points without losing the Zing. I have been looking for employment now for about 3 months with no success. Please help. Jane Doe 1234 ABC StreetAny Town, USA 12345 555-555-5555 * HelpMe@pleasehelp.com
EXPERIENCE SUMMARY
Over 12 years of experience managing commercial administration issues. Proven leadership in financial services, event planning, customer satisfaction and technical support. Demonstrated ability to identify complex problems, gather the appropriate resources, review and refine alternatives, schedule and implement solutions. Business experience includes supervision, marketing, customer service, organizational and planning acumen, training, staffing, development and coordination expertise. Outstanding communications skills, works well in a highly diverse fast changing environment.
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I did two things: your resume is indicating that you're currently working at two places right now, and you can drop the "references by request" line.
"I would love to marry all of my skills into one harmonious resume sothat I can re enter corporate America bringing the old w/the new andget a great job." And therein lies your problem. Corporate America has jobs to fill. They define them, and then look for the person best qualified. Your resume lacks focus. Your Experience Summary has five sentences, and the second one lists four different areas. Try Objective: A position as an Event Planner and use it for all your Event Planner positions. Remove or push to the end of your resume all stuff that has nothing to do with Event Planning. Repeat for all other positions you're applying for. It makes the companies' job so much easier when they can see at a glance what kind of position you'd fit. | |
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