Hi, all,
    If you would be so kind, I would appreciate some "tweaking" with this resume.

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2001 - present Administrator    Private Trust Midwest/Iowa   Overseetrust investments. Negotiate property leases. Pay invoices, trackincome and expenses. Document all financial transactions, scanning andfiling. Consult attorneys concerning valid business practice andadministrative liability. Assist trustee with personal business,including medical and legal.
	1/2000 - 7/2000 Midwest account representative     "wholesale greenhouse" Midwest/Iowa   Analyzeand schedule deliveries based on weather and climatic patterns. Manage,from initial order to final store check-in, delivery and orderfulfillment throughout territory including Kansas, Nebraska, Missouri,Iowa, Minnesota, and Wisconsin. Maintain weekly phone contact withstore/greenhouse managers to assure product quality and timelydelivery. Route and schedule external client deliveries. Performcost/return analysis on prospective accounts. Order in-house nurserysupplies according to projected ship dates and quantities. Lead toursthrough wholesale facility. Work with truckers to route shipments,troubleshoot delivery problems, reschedule deliveries.
	1/1999 - 3/1999 Processor   national mortgage division/comm. bank Midwest/Iowa   Pinpointand address specific areas lacking external communications. Buildnetworks of contacts in the mortgage and title industry nationwide toassure future completion of tasks in future. Reorganize and prioritizeinternal tasks by urgency and specific category, i.e. bond loans,missing or incomplete abstracts, title guarantee. Work with externalmortgage companies to release abstracts. Process title guaranteeapplications. Expedite processing of federally-funded mortgageapplications. Work with title and abstract companies to speed updatingand release of abstracts and titles. Make decisions as to whenattorneys should be consulted in regards to a particular mortgage. Workwith attorneys to document updating and release of abstracts.

 

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      I don't like the look and sound of all that, but am at a loss as how best to describe those jobs. They were all customer service and problem-solving positions. From 1997 to 2001, even when I was working "formally," I was primary caretaker/business manager for my aging parents. How do I use that to my advantage?
        The years since 2001 are particularly difficult to describe. A critical eye would be much appreciated.
Thanks,
OITS